wow! I love it!!!! so awesome

Wow! I really like this pic ne~ I like bg ne~

I mister bartender. n_n

This is excellent!!! The painting job is fantastic, it's really nice and tight, which is great for the manga look. I'm really impressed

gapapa ah prop nya masih ok2 aja ^^, sya sih gatel ma depth orang yg di balik meja aja ^^ kyknya lbh asyik kl lbh 'mundur' lg ke blakang ^^
tapi bagus nee....X3
like it !!!!

the colours..as usual are awesome !!!

*-* Woaaaa!! so cool!!! well.. from my point of view x3 its such a beautiful drawing.. *-* especially those colours you used and the gradients.. wooo... T-T I wish I could make watercolours look like that.. q º+º p a new fav! x3 heey and your girlis soo girlish.. very well done

This picture is very good. I would just leave it at that but since you WANT critiqueing there are a couple of things I could point out.
The thighs and biceps on the girl, could be a little bigger. Your entire leg and arm isn't all the same size, especially between your thigh and calf.
On the guy sitting on the stool I believe his calfs could be smaller. Judging by the rest of his shape his calfs would not be that big, plus they are almost bigger than his thighs.
I also believe his eyes should be smaller. The girls are ok big b/c she is a girl^^ but I think his eyes are too big for his face even if you want him to have big eyes.
Also, about how his head is turned, when the shoulders are slumped like that it's almost impossible to put your chin on the back of your shoulder. His shoulders should be turned a little.
I hope all that helps. Don't get me wrong with all that i absolutely love the picture!
Keep up the good work!

wwwwwoooooooooooooowwwwwwwww! I am simply LOVING this picture! 'Tis extraordianary! FAVE!

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"He sounds exactly like Moody," said Harry quietly, tucking the letter away again inside his robes. "'Constant vigilance!' You'd think I walk around with my eyes shut, banging off the walls...." !!!!! Gotta love Harry!

HOW do you get your colours to look so NICE??????!!!!!!
You use watercolour, right?
What type of board/paper do you use?
I think I need to experiment


As for the preportion, it looks fine to me.

If you think it looks bad, well, at least it will encourage you to try harder for the next time so then your pictures will become even more beautiful!
I'm 100% sure they will
(even tho they're AWESOME already!)

this work is so beautiful. the first time i looked at it i was amazed. the coloring is just so great. i really feel like i'm really in a bar. this work really grabs me into the setting. great job.